Sinkhole #3
Not that I’m a guru or something, but here are a few basic things that I like to have clear in my comics: spelling, grammar (within reason, I’m not the best at it myself sometimes) and some clear message, however tiny, that one story has ended so you can move onto the next one without a huge degree of confusion. My biggest problem with this is that I’m still not sure if this was all one big story or a bunch of small ones. I’m going with the latter, because if it was one big story it would make no sense at all, but there’s nothing to help me know if that’s true or not. Other than that, I liked the art. The rabbit counting his money was kind of funny, as was the kidnapped man who was looking for his dog. Everything else was kind of chaotic. Worth a look if you’re a fan of puzzles, but there’s definite potential if he gets his organizational skills together a little (or abandons them completely, it depends what he’s going for). E-mail him and see what else he has around.
