{"id":2774,"date":"2010-05-02T13:33:34","date_gmt":"2010-05-02T18:33:34","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/?p=2774"},"modified":"2010-07-22T22:44:48","modified_gmt":"2010-07-23T03:44:48","slug":"riley-will","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/?p=2774","title":{"rendered":"Riley, Will &#8211; Sinkhole #3"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.willrad.com\/\">Website<\/a><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/images\/sinkhole31.jpg\" border=\"0\" alt=\"\" width=\"389\" height=\"637\" \/><\/p>\n<p><strong>Sinkhole #3<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Not that I&#8217;m a guru or something, but here are a few basic things that I like to have clear in my comics: spelling, grammar (within reason, I&#8217;m not the best at it myself sometimes) and some clear message, however tiny, that one story has ended so you can move onto the next one without a huge degree of confusion. My biggest problem with this is that I&#8217;m still not sure if this was all one big story or a bunch of small ones. I&#8217;m going with the latter, because if it was one big story it would make no sense at all, but there&#8217;s nothing to help me know if that&#8217;s true or not. Other than that, I liked the art. The rabbit counting his money was kind of funny, as was the kidnapped man who was looking for his dog. Everything else was kind of chaotic. Worth a look if you&#8217;re a fan of puzzles, but there&#8217;s definite potential if he gets his organizational skills together a little (or abandons them completely, it depends what he&#8217;s going for).\u00c2\u00a0 <a href=\"mailto:automatedcomics@excite.com\">E-mail him<\/a> and see what else he has around.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/images\/sinkhole32.jpg\" border=\"0\" alt=\"\" width=\"400\" height=\"632\" \/><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Website Sinkhole #3 Not that I&#8217;m a guru or something, but here are a few basic things that I like to have clear in my comics: spelling, grammar (within reason, I&#8217;m not the best at it myself sometimes) and some clear message, however tiny, that one story has ended so you can move onto the [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[3],"tags":[1940,3923],"class_list":["post-2774","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-reviews","tag-sinkhole","tag-will-riley"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2774","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=2774"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2774\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":16533,"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2774\/revisions\/16533"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=2774"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=2774"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/opticalsloth.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=2774"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}